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Hmm...a good snapshot. I personally think that it would have looked better if you would have positioned yourself in such a way that the shadow would have fallen right across the middle of your face, that is, in between your eyebrows and going over the nose sellion. The posture's alright. A likable piece of art I'd say.
-- "Change is just too hard for me. I've been using the same oven mitts for twelve years!" - Danny Tanner ------------------------------------------------- Got nothing to do? Why don't you give my gallery a look! [link] I love how you played with asymmetry here. In the sense that the shadow does not really go across the middle of your face, but rather, it is positioned vertically while your face is the one that is tilted so that it doesn't stay vertical as well.
The only thing I wish is... this was bigger. Like, more resolution. Aside from that, keep it up. -- "Happy ending my big toe... I'll show you what REAL power is!" |
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Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi 1/2000 second F/2.0 35 mm 100 Apr 8, 2009, 3:05:42 PM |
Critiques
17 is a weird age to be at!"
Okay, so let's put a question mark behind your title seventeen forever ! Here it is: ?
I wanted it big and fat because everybody can see it in your eyes: This age is not so much fun, oh no! There are too many struggles and fights, too many unsolved questions and too much ahead of a seventeen-year-old to feel comfortable in this age. All of this can be recognized in your pose as much as in your look, and I think there should be someone to calm you down a little, somebody to care for you, somebody to love you - just someone who's able to show you the moon up above in the daylight and the stars in the sky when it's nighttime. Yeah, life can be so nice.
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