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I HOPE NOT!!!!!!!!!!!
17 is a weird age to be at!

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:iconbeautifulexperience:
"I HOPE NOT!!!!!!!!!!!
17 is a weird age to be at!"


Okay, so let's put a question mark behind your title seventeen forever ! Here it is: ?
I wanted it big and fat because everybody can see it in your eyes: This age is not so much fun, oh no! There are too many struggles and fights, too many unsolved questions and too much ahead of a seventeen-year-old to feel comfortable in this age. All of this can be recognized in your pose as much as in your look, and I think there should be someone to calm you down a little, somebody to care for you, somebody to love you - just someone who's able to show you the moon up above in the daylight and the stars in the sky when it's nighttime. Yeah, life can be so nice.
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:iconxanhisam:
Hmm...a good snapshot. I personally think that it would have looked better if you would have positioned yourself in such a way that the shadow would have fallen right across the middle of your face, that is, in between your eyebrows and going over the nose sellion. The posture's alright. A likable piece of art I'd say.

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:icon50calwolf:
yea i agree with the above guy, id like it more if it were positioned better :)

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:icondullface:
Anything below 20 is marvellous.

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:iconthetimedevourer:
I love how you played with asymmetry here. In the sense that the shadow does not really go across the middle of your face, but rather, it is positioned vertically while your face is the one that is tilted so that it doesn't stay vertical as well.


The only thing I wish is... this was bigger. Like, more resolution. Aside from that, keep it up.

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happy Birthday by theway (late that is)
I like it :)

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:iconhay2u:
try 19 lol

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:iconhannahhavoc:
thats sooo played out

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i can tell you that much.
as much as i loved to be 17, the best was 19.
over here you're allowed to do anything you want at 18, but you're not 18 anymore... so you're not a new-one anylonger, but still not in your 20s, ready to be 30 :D

wait for the big 19 ;)

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Apr 8, 2009, 3:05:42 PM

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